When the winds blew @g@in tonight..
& i s@w fl@shing of light..
I rem. the d@ys when u held me tight..
I w@nt th@t old love sight.
L@st night w@s s@me @s tod@y..
But i w@s h@ppy in love yesterd@y..
Now not even God listens to my pr@y..
So,how'll u know wt i w@nn@ s@y.
I didnt ch@nge,i rem@in the s@me..
But my love for u w@s @ g@me..
@s l@st night when u c@lled my n@me..
Te@rs in my eyes w@s ur @im.
I still c@n feel the sweet smell..
& ur @rms on which i fell..
Night tod@y is like hell..
Tell me will this ever get well?
I w@nn@ ch@nge the direction of wind..
Stop the time & press rewind..
I request God to be kind..
& t@ke me @ few d@ys behind.
Hold me tight..just hold me tight..
So,th@t i c@nt feel the light..
& spend the whole night..
Loving me..m@ke me feel @lright.
& i s@w fl@shing of light..
I rem. the d@ys when u held me tight..
I w@nt th@t old love sight.
L@st night w@s s@me @s tod@y..
But i w@s h@ppy in love yesterd@y..
Now not even God listens to my pr@y..
So,how'll u know wt i w@nn@ s@y.
I didnt ch@nge,i rem@in the s@me..
But my love for u w@s @ g@me..
@s l@st night when u c@lled my n@me..
Te@rs in my eyes w@s ur @im.
I still c@n feel the sweet smell..
& ur @rms on which i fell..
Night tod@y is like hell..
Tell me will this ever get well?
I w@nn@ ch@nge the direction of wind..
Stop the time & press rewind..
I request God to be kind..
& t@ke me @ few d@ys behind.
Hold me tight..just hold me tight..
So,th@t i c@nt feel the light..
& spend the whole night..
Loving me..m@ke me feel @lright.
3 comments:
bahut bahut sundar likha hai aapne....aankhe nam ho gayi...bahut kuch yaad dila diya tumahri in lines ne ....keep writing ...
hey aishwarya,
its really difficult to comment on this poem.even you know that its my favo.its getting really difficult to judge your words,everytime you presenting a different fact and phase of life is a more beautiful and an entirely unique way.i wonder how you got such a wonderful sense to feel.you gotta wonderful vision.
its true writing sweety!
you simply rocks!!!
hey aishwarya,
i guess this poem seems more b'ful everytime you read it.emotional,optimistic,sad....but above all,right from your heart and it enters directly to the core.you are too good again.and should seriously give it a thought to become a writer by profession.
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