Wednesday, April 25, 2007

PROMISE


Promise to be with mw @lw@ys..
From 1st sun r@ys..
Till end of my d@ys..
"Only Me" t@ke no other w@ys.

World @round me w@nts to stop..
Love in me is wt they dont spot..
In u im c@ught..
For u on e@rth i w@s brought.

Promise me love outflow..
or give me @ de@th blow..
How much it @ffect lemme show..
Will u offer rose in my gr@ve row?..

Nota-bene my l@st note,without notion..
My he@rt W@S full of emotion..
No whr noxius..null or dull..
But w@s unsolved numeric@l.

Which included the seconds we spent together..
with music in @ir..
@nd cold we@ther..
Tell me do u still remember..
The promise of love..
& l@st summer.

2 comments:

रंजू भाटिया said...

Which included the seconds we spent together..
with music in @ir..
@nd cold we@ther..
Tell me do u still remember..
The promise of love..
& l@st summer.

waah!! bahut hi true feelings likhi hai...tumne ...main ek padhne aayi thii par yahana toh sab bahut sundar hain ...god bless u

Shiriish said...

Promise me love outflow..
or give me @ de@th blow..
How much it @ffect lemme show..
Will u offer rose in my gr@ve row?..
hey aishwarya,
its really touching.you really force to use all my heart while going through your poems.it seems really easy for you to create the scenario with words.......nice