H@ppening of the unexpected..
@ turn our lives took..
Nightm@re turned into re@lity..
U w@lked @w@y without 2nd look.
107 d@ys without you..
Nothing seemed to 've ch@nged..
Im still longing to hold you..
But u @re eng@ged.
Moon still t@lks to me..
Tells me you @re sleeping..
I dont think it tells u @nything..
Else u wud've known im weeping.
Pl@ces where u took me..
St@nd the w@y they were..
I've been there @ll @lone..
Though i promised without u i'll never.
Gifts which u g@ve me..
@re @ll coverd with dust..
Like the ch@in of my love..
Not broken,its just rust.
Pictures of our together..
H@ve still not f@ded..
Memories of love..
@re still not grey sh@ded.
Sun still sets with be@uty..
Hugs the mighty l@ke..
Thoughts of our eve w@lks..
Keeps me night @w@ke..
Clouds turn the sky d@rk..
R@in w@shes my blue..
This is when i w@nt u..
U @lw@ys h@d @ clue.
Nothing seemed to 've ch@nged..
Even the w@y i've cried..
Only U 've w@lked @way..
& the roses u g@ve 've dried.
@ turn our lives took..
Nightm@re turned into re@lity..
U w@lked @w@y without 2nd look.
107 d@ys without you..
Nothing seemed to 've ch@nged..
Im still longing to hold you..
But u @re eng@ged.
Moon still t@lks to me..
Tells me you @re sleeping..
I dont think it tells u @nything..
Else u wud've known im weeping.
Pl@ces where u took me..
St@nd the w@y they were..
I've been there @ll @lone..
Though i promised without u i'll never.
Gifts which u g@ve me..
@re @ll coverd with dust..
Like the ch@in of my love..
Not broken,its just rust.
Pictures of our together..
H@ve still not f@ded..
Memories of love..
@re still not grey sh@ded.
Sun still sets with be@uty..
Hugs the mighty l@ke..
Thoughts of our eve w@lks..
Keeps me night @w@ke..
Clouds turn the sky d@rk..
R@in w@shes my blue..
This is when i w@nt u..
U @lw@ys h@d @ clue.
Nothing seemed to 've ch@nged..
Even the w@y i've cried..
Only U 've w@lked @way..
& the roses u g@ve 've dried.
9 comments:
Hi just seen the link in Preeti's scrapbook. This one is really wonderful, really touches.
is there any word above awesome????
fantastic mam!!!!!!!!!!
hey aishwarya,
its full of emotions and i really wonder how can you manage to express human emotions in such a wonderful way.its really touches the soul.beautiful!
what,s a beauty ?
words are flowing like water.
emotions are bleeding.
imagination is flying in the sky in all yr poetry.
expressions are awesome.
what,s else.....
they have touched my heart...
thanks...
well i seriously donno this gal, but her piece of work is extraordinary,i usually dont save msgs but i had 2 save dis one,its so wonderful 2 c such a lovely display of ones imagination, and it really touches ur heart especially wen it comes frm a person who is a kind of stranger 2 u.....i liked her work so much dat it has made me jealous of her, i actually felt da depth of her work and i must confess dat u r just wonderful....
hats off 2 u lady ......
nd always keep up da gud work
Excellent work Aishwarya. I donot have word to express. Well chosen word coherent with imagination and emotions. DONOT HAVE WORD TO EXPRESS. When I finished reading this poem, I was reminded of the opening stanza of Spirit Song Over the Waters, a poem by Johann Wolfgang Goethe:
The soul of man resembleth water: From heaven it cometh, to heaven it soareth, And then again to earth descendeth, Changing ever.Wah…
What to say about “Request” wonderful, remind me the sixth stanza of MADHUSHALA”
Madiralay jane ko ghar se chalta hai pinewala
Kis path se jayoo, asmanjas me hai wah bholabhala
Alag alag path batlate sab , apr mai yah batlata hoo
Rah apkad to ek chalachal, pa jayega madhushala
Well, keep your writing passion up and good work continues….
Best/Manoj
Good Job..
Keep Going..
i knw i have bothered u and disturbed u a lot, but thats not my fault.
i have seen innocence in ur words, some truth which is rare to find
and believe me
from the bottom of my heart my dear friend , although we are not yet
i will pray for ur gud luck in life
may u get watever u want in life
and rather i would say u may get watever u deserve in life coz u may want only a few things but i m sure u deserve a lot
and no using any harsh words for urself
ur a beautiful soul and idiot are the people who cannot c this
wont bore u much
would just wanna say
GOD BLESS YOU
and god bless all
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